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Post by Darth Beelzeb on Jun 13, 2005 0:29:30 GMT -5
(Sorry I'm kind of bad at this)
Darth Beelzeb was born on Mustafar and had a fine early childhood. He trained many styles of sword fighting and often trained with his rival, Serge. Later his parents were killed and he became an orphan. He swore to avenge his parents' death. He was soon, he was given the oppurtunity to train to become a jedi. He accepted it and bacame a padawan training in the force and created a standard jedi lightsaber with a blue edge.
Far before his training was complete, he left the jedi temple and dissapeard dissapeared to an isolated planet. There he trained even harder to his own standards realizing the force powers of the Sith. Beelzeb became especially powerful in creating lightning and enginering. He created his own ships and found new parts to compose a new lightsaber, different from the standard jedi one. This one had a longer blade and was dark red, made from a crystal found on the planet.
Eventually he was found by the sith and pledged his loyalty to the dark side, finding even more strength of the force. Darth Beelzeb, unlike most other sith, still has complete control over his mind, not becoming power crazy or insane.
Because of Darth Beelzebs individual training, he has a unique and very effective fighting style and wears different clothes then the normal sith.
My Avatar is how Darth Beelzeb (I) look, kind of like Cloud from FF7
NOTE: This isn't done yet, but I'll update it soon
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Post by serge mobley on Jun 13, 2005 0:42:45 GMT -5
I think it great (how did you get a avatar like that)
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Post by Darth Beelzeb on Jun 13, 2005 9:22:21 GMT -5
Thanks, I'm going to add more probably...
And for my avatar, I found a picture of Cloud and drew a red lightsaber. Notice the difference in the quality of Cloud and the lightsaber.
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Post by Arc commander on Jun 14, 2005 16:52:40 GMT -5
you can tell..... but cool story. i got my avatar off google.
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Post by Darth Lavos on Jun 14, 2005 17:32:14 GMT -5
yeah, i'd like something of my character. i'm working on one to get crono and modify him a bit.
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Post by Darth Beelzeb on Jun 14, 2005 23:23:01 GMT -5
UPDATE!!! I just added some to the story, it isn't much, but read it if you want!
Darth Beelzeb was born on Mustafar and had a fine early childhood. Since his early life, he never liked to be "just another member of a group". He often found some way to stand out and be better. He trained many styles of sword fighting and often trained with his rival, Serge. Later his parents were killed by an unknown, skilled fighter and he became an orphan. He swore to avenge his parents' death and was soon given the oppurtunity to train to become a jedi. He accepted it and bacame a padawan learner, training in the force and created a standard jedi lightsaber with a blue edge.
Far before his training was complete, he left the jedi temple and dissapeard dissapeared to an isolated planet. There he trained even harder to his own standards realizing the force powers of the Sith. Beelzeb became especially powerful in creating lightning and enginering. He created his own ships and found new parts to compose a new lightsaber, different from the standard jedi one. This one had a longer blade and was dark red, made from a crystal found on the planet. To Darth Beelzeb, this lightsaber marked the true beggining of his life as an individual, never to fall completely under someones control.
Eventually he was found by the sith and pledged his loyalty to the dark side, finding even more strength of the force and skills with the lightsaber. Darth Beelzeb, unlike most other sith, still has complete control over his mind, not becoming power crazy or insane.
As his powers grew in the Sith he became the apprentice of Darth Malak. Under his training he learned of even more powers as he began to follow his every command, destroying large Republic landmarks such as the Republic Federation Trade Ship, and the Republic Cloning facilities. When Malak was killed by a bounty hunter, Darth Beelzeb took in Darth Lavos as his apprentice and began to train him with what he had learned from his master.
Because of Darth Beelzebs individual training, he has a unique and very effective fighting style, has the unique ability to copy his opponents abilities for as long as he fights them giving him the same or more edge and skill then his opponent. Also because of this, he wears different clothes then the normal sith.
My avatar is how Darth Beelzeb (I) look, kind of like Cloud from FF7
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Post by Kyle SkyWalker on Jun 14, 2005 23:31:17 GMT -5
you might proove a challenge to me as i can do the same thng in combat
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Post by Darth Beelzeb on Jun 16, 2005 21:56:36 GMT -5
Just for you who haven't seen this before:
Name : Darth Beelzeb Species: Human Sex: Male Planet of Origin: Mustavar Height: 5'7" Weight: 195 lbs Hair color: Blonde Eye color: Red Jedi Class: Sith Lightsaber Description: Dark Red single lightsaber (a little longer), handle looks similar to Obi's in EpII Attire: Look at avatar Favorite Force Power: Force Storm, Lightning Personality most resembling which character from the movies: Anakin(dark side, more patience) Fighting style most resembling which character from the movies: Anakin+Yoda
Points (max: 30) Strength: 12 Dexterity: 8 Constuition(Life): 5 Wisdom(strength with force powers): 5 Rival: Serge Apprentice: Darth Lavos
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Post by serge mobley on Jun 17, 2005 1:43:05 GMT -5
thats pretty good
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Post by Kyle SkyWalker on Jun 17, 2005 12:47:10 GMT -5
yeah you sig is awesome
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Post by Darth Beelzeb on Jun 17, 2005 17:34:38 GMT -5
Thanks, I got my sig from Master Kit Fisto! If he's not too busy you should try PMing him!
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Post by serge mobley on Jun 17, 2005 19:09:47 GMT -5
i already did
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Post by Darth Beelzeb on Jun 18, 2005 0:09:58 GMT -5
Just in case anyone wanted to know, I'll be adding the final update to this soon, and it will be a pretty big change. Or at least bigger tham from the 1st to the 2nd
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Post by Kyle SkyWalker on Jun 21, 2005 0:41:06 GMT -5
ok cool look forward to readin it
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Post by Darth Beelzeb on Jun 21, 2005 19:47:35 GMT -5
Sorry that this is taking so long, but I was waiting for something to happen on "The Real Episode 3 cont.. cont...".
I have something planned, but it is moving kind of slow right now.
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